
By Kristy
(Grade 6)
Once there was a girl named Tamara who
lived in California. Sadly her father had died and her
mother married Frank. Tamara hated Frank and his
daughter, Francine. Unfortunately Tamara's mother
became ill and also died.
Frank and Francine made Tamara do all of the
chores. Tamara became a prisoner in her own house.
Meanwhile at a California mansion, a former actor,
who had lost touch with reality, thought he was a king.
One day he was extremely angry. "I demand a
queen!" King Tyson boomed.
His butler, George said,
"How will you get a queen?"
Tyson then grew very
angry and almost blew smoke from his ears. He
answered George, "Well, what do you think I should
do?"
George thought for a moment and then said, "Perhaps, you should hold a surfing contest."
At that
moment King Tyson yelled for all the messengers in the
castle (I mean mansion). Everyone came running and
King Tyson shared the news.
The news spread throughout the state and to
Tamara's house. The next morning Tamara ran down
the stairs and made breakfast for Francine and her
stepfather.
Tamara was about to go and clean
Francine's room when she heard Frank speaking to
Francine. "Francine, there is a surfing contest to
find the Queen of California,"said Frank.
"I could be
queen!" Francine added. At that point Tamara
walked in and served them their breakfast. "What took
you so long girl? You knew I was hungry!" Francine
snorted.
As Tamara sat down Frank looked at her and
said, "Just for the fun of it I am going to let you enter
the contest Tamara," Frank spat out.
Tamara was so
happy, but then she realized that she didn't have a
surfboard. Frank walked away from Tamara cackling
an evil laugh. This made Tamara feel very sad.
The next day was the day of the contest and
Tamara spent her time cleaning the house. Suddenly,
sparkles came shooting out from what appeared to be
"nowhere" and then BANG! Her fairie goddess
Venus came from the cluster of noise and sparkles.
At
first, Tamara was confused. She had always read books
on fairie godmothers, but a fairie goddess?
"I heard
you crying all the way from Olympus, the castle in the
sky. What's wrong my dear?" asked Venus.
"You
wouldn't care! You're a goddess, and never have
problems!" cried Tamara.
"Oh, but I do care! I will
help you, what is your problem?" replied Venus.
Tamara told her all about how her mother and father
died, and how she is treated so poorly in her own home.
Venus swung her wand around and blasted a ray of light
onto the comb on Tamara's dresser. Suddenly a new
surf board appeared.
"Now, go to that contest, and
win!!!" Venus yelled.
Tamara picked up the surf board,
wiped her tears, and ran to the contest.
When Tamara arrived at the beach she
informed George that she wanted to enter the contest.
"Okay, you're up Tamara." said George.
Tamara put
her surfboard into the water and started paddling. She
road the waves with splendor and dominated the contest!
When Tamara came back to the shore, everyone
surrounded her. They covered her with flowers too!
All at once a dune buggy carrying King Tyson
drove up. At the same time that Tamara hopped into
the dune buggy, King George realized he wasn't really a
king. They drove into the sunset. Eventually Tyson &
Tamara went on to make surfer movies together and
lived happily ever after!
The End

